Under The Phone by Nicholas Leonard Ivey
Publishing: January 13, 2021 by SFS Publishing
Reason I chose to Read this Book: I was sent a widget from BookReviewBuzz, and it is a short story….which is a great way to be introduced to a new author.
Under The Phone by Nicholas Leonard Ivey is a short sci-fi story.
First, let me thank NetGalley, the publisher SFS, BookReviewBuzz, and of course the author, for providing me with a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. All opinions are my own.
My Synopsis: (No major reveals, but if concerned, skip to My Opinions)
Jack (a computer programmer) and Stacy (a psychologist) move to Sherly Pointe. He will be working for a high tech company, and she has a job at the hospital.
The old mining town of Sherly Pointe has a rather strange reputation with conspiracy theorists…there are problems with the water, there are UFO sightings, it’s a government installation….
Jack and Stacy are not too concerned, until things start happening, and one of Jack’s teamworkers ends up missing.
My Opinions:
First, I am really glad this was a short story. This was probably the poorest editing job I have EVER encountered, so I am going to try really hard to not let that affect my review of the book.
The premise of a world takeover through our cell phones was interesting. However, the “pyramids” and the triangle UFO’s may have needed a little further explanation. The premise sort of fell apart.
The book seemed really disjointed, and conversations seemed to be missing pieces. There are no real introductions of people. A new character Bubba shows up and his first words were “I told too” (I assume it meant I told you), but who was he talking to? Because it was Jack who responded, and as far as I could tell they had never met. I realize in a short story it is difficult for the characters to have any real depth, but there was no depth at all to anyone. Even Jack and Stacy were just shallow…
Anyway, I think this one missed the mark with me, and I realize short stories are sometimes hard to get into, but this one really didn’t work. If this wasn’t a NetGalley book, I may not review it at all, because I hate giving a poor review. However, others have read and reviewed in a number of places, so…..I would probably only give it 1 star, but am upping it to 2 stars because I think part of the problem was the editing that made the whole thing worse, (although other reasons can be noted above).
Anyway, these are just my opinions, maybe you’ll enjoy it!
Read: March, 2022
About The Author: Nicholas Leonard Ivey is an American software developer as well as an author.
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- Website: https://nickivey.com/
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I have also reviewed this book on GoodReads: https://www.goodreads.com/review/show/4597754189
Have you read it? Do you plan to? Tell me your thoughts…do you agree or disagree with my assessment? Either way, I’d love to know.